Before closing the laptop, I looked at the framed photograph of young Bula on the mantle. Eight years old, missing her front teeth, laughing at something I’d said in a Denver backyard. I wondered how much collateral damage this war would create before it finally ended.
Monday morning found me at Dr. Chen’s clinic fifteen minutes early. The medical building was modern and single-story, positioned just off a local highway lined with American chain pharmacies and grocery stores. I filled out paperwork requesting copies of all test results and assessments.
When Dr. Chen called me back, I explained directly and honestly.
“I’m sixty-seven years old, own property, and want baseline medical documentation proving my physical and mental competency,” I said.
She was a sharp woman in her fifties with the weathered competence characteristic of someone who’d practiced rural medicine for decades in the Rockies. Her expression showed immediate understanding.
“I see,” she said. “Unfortunately, I’ve encountered situations like this before. Adult children sometimes challenge parents’ competency to gain control of assets.”
“That’s exactly what I’m preventing,” I replied. “Can you provide a detailed written assessment?”
“Absolutely,” she said. “I’ll conduct comprehensive cognitive testing and provide a formal letter for legal purposes.”
“I want documentation that can stand up in court if necessary,” I said.
“Then let’s be extremely thorough,” she answered.
The examination consumed ninety minutes. Blood pressure, reflexes, blood work, then cognitive testing. Mini mental state examination, clock drawing, memory recall exercises. She asked me to draw a clock showing three fifteen. I drew it precisely. She asked me to remember three words: apple, table, penny. She instructed me to recall them after five minutes. I remembered all three accurately. She asked me to count backward from one hundred by sevens. I did so without error.
When we finished, Dr. Chen typed notes at her computer, then printed a letter on clinic letterhead.
“Mr. Ray Nelson is mentally competent, physically healthy, fully capable of managing his own affairs and making independent decisions regarding his property and finances,” it read. “Patient alert, oriented, cognitively intact. No signs of dementia, confusion, or diminished capacity.”
She signed it, applied the clinic stamp, and handed me both the letter and copies of all test results.
“Two hundred forty dollars for the extended evaluation,” the receptionist said.
I paid by credit card, noting the transaction carefully for my records.
Two days later, I was in my workshop shed near the cabin, organizing tools, when an unfamiliar sedan pulled up the dirt driveway. A professionally dressed woman in her forties emerged, carrying a tablet and an official folder.
“Mr. Nelson?” she called. “I’m Margaret Willows from Adult Protective Services. I’m here regarding a complaint filed about your welfare.”
The flash of anger was immediate, but I kept my expression neutral and professional.
“A complaint filed by whom?” I asked.
“I can’t disclose that during my initial assessment,” she said. “May I come inside?”
“Of course,” I said. “Would you like coffee?”
“No, thank you,” she replied. “This is a standard welfare check.”
I let her inside, holding the door open fully. Transparency.
“I should tell you upfront,” I said, “I’m involved in a property dispute with family members. I suspect this complaint is part of that conflict, not genuine concern about my welfare.”
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